Narrative writing

 

One day me and my friends went to the beach to do racing on the kayaking and then we got our life jacket on so we can be safe and then me and my friends Leone Viliami sione went into our kayak and then went far to see who was the fastest And me and leone was the fastest and then we stop because we heard a sound Viliami and siones kayak and it sake their kayak and they were trying not to move because they noun that it was a shark and then it move a little bit and then the shark moved up to get them then they went fast as they can back to the end and we did too then the sharks were casing us then the sharks opened their mouth and then layer came out of their mouth to our kayaks then they broke.