Friday, 8 September 2017

Cross country recount

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  1. Introduction (Hook, who, what, when, where)
  2. 2 - 3 paragraphs
  3. Conclusion

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On a very hot hot day at pt england school we had cross country day. The year ones were first and we didn't not nowhere was the year ones because it was a mix of people. And we had to sit on the hot ground and there was music on the big speaker. And we were second to last when it was our race we went to the line and Mr burt had the clapping thing on his hands. And he slapped the clap and then we raced and heaps of people were in front of me and kurtas came first. And the grass was muddy and all of us got dirty and some people had stiches.