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Friday 11 September 2015

this is my Emil's wonderful pie.

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Emily wonderful pie
After you have read the story you are going to write a
retell of that happened are we  


once upon time their was a girl that was
Emily she had a squishy squashy and
mince to munch flake bake crispy
to crunch pie then a girl that was sniffing
she saw a pie she said could i have a little
eat of that pie yes you can have a little eat


a boy came and said could i have a eat
said the boy yes you can have a eat Emily
said the boy said this is the cool pie said the boy then a girl came and she said
could i have a eat yes you can.


and then a teacher came and said could
i have a eat said the teacher yes you can have a eat then their was no moor.

and then she had a little pie and their
were some pie left and then she saw a
girl that had a pie and she said could i
have some.

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