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One day me and my friends Jake and Luke went fishing for fish to eat for dinner at the water then we went in the boat then we went off for some fish then we got our fishing rods out then we putted it into the water and then I got fish but it was too! Heavy for me to get then me and my friends pulled the fishing rod put it was still too! Heavy for me and my friends so we kept on pulling and pulling and then it came out and it was big! And it was not a fish we thought it was A fish put it was shark!.

Then we put the shark down then we ran away as fast as we can because the shark was trying to get us we were close to get there then we kept on going and going then we got there then the shark went a way to find some people to eat for dinner.

 

 

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One day me and my friends went to the beach to do racing on the kayaking and then we got our life jacket on so we can be safe and then me and my friends Leone Viliami sione went into our kayak and then went far to see who was the fastest And me and leone was the fastest and then we stop because we heard a sound Viliami and siones kayak and it sake their kayak and they were trying not to move because they noun that it was a shark and then it move a little bit and then the shark moved up to get them then they went fast as they can back to the end and we did too then the sharks were casing us then the sharks opened their mouth and then layer came out of their mouth to our kayaks then they broke.  

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